All Comments on 'Timestop: Classroom'

by Jessicavarus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Cool Concept

It would be fun to get in that sort of mischief, paying nasty people back and getting a little sexual pleasure while you are at it. I was thinking that the transitions, to the bystanders, from clothed to non-clothed, must have been a little stark and weird. But I suppose I am being a bit too pragmatic, for a fantasy. Write more please.

Bi47Bi47over 5 years ago
Excellent

Please keep going.i definitely like how you think 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

IronnickIronnickover 5 years ago
Awesome!

right down my alley! PLEASE continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wtf

If you don’t fucking know the root of 81 in college, you deserve to be shit on in front of your classmates. I feel bad for the poor teacher, hope this dumb bitch gets karma in a future story.

Hawthorn13Hawthorn13almost 3 years ago

I love your writing style .. I don't see how you can charge .99c for a short story. But if you wrote a small series of books based on these characters, I bet you would do well on Kindle Unlimited.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Any chance you might eventually finish the story?

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