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Click here"I think we're ready for that chat, Zach," Sean said, while Dion twirled the watch on its chain.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoHey there, longtime fan (been reading since “faggot delivery boy”). Love this story, solid smut and a wonderful plot.
My one request — more Jack scenes please. I feel like his ultra dominant wrestler fucking could use an extended treatment. I get off so hard to those scenes, for some reason. Might be the manhandling, might be the filthy mouth, idk. Whereas I must confess mr perfect kink bf Dion leaves me a bit unsatisfied. (Still jerk off plenty to those tho.) great work on these.
Ardent12358over 1 year agoMy heart sank at the end of this chapter. Please don’t leave us in suspense for too long. I would hate for Zach to loose both of these guys in his life and of course…all of his powers. So gut wrenching. I don’t like really Dion and now Sean too….ugh. Love your writing though!
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis story has been an amazing combination of hot scenes and fascinating story. I love the premise and the characters and seeing how Zach has used it for good. I'm afraid for him, but hope getting his secret finally in the open allows him to continue relationships with both of them in some capacity. Hate where you stopped but thanks for writing this great story.
Anonymousover 1 year agoSooo good! We need the next chapter ASAP. Jake may be really pissed at Zack now for pulling Seans heartstrings.
Anonymousover 1 year agoMy dear Gaytimestop, have you ever heard the old wartime saying, "Lose lips sink ships". By saying it may be a while before the next chapter you may have just sunk yours. There are ways of getting information out of people. Are you aware of how effective tickle torture can be in making someone talk. So, take as long as you like writing chapter #20, but you'll have no one to blame but yourself for what happens if you take too long. We are organizing and we are waiting. TICK-TOCK, TICK-TOCK!!! MLF
Anonymousover 1 year agoWait didn't he had/get the ability to just thinking/wanting to have the watch and it would appear on his hand the first time something like this happened?
Straycatndcover 1 year agoOh snap! I wasn't expecting that. I hope this doesn't destroy Zach and Ds relationship.
googolplexover 1 year agolol you dick you better have the next chapter ready after a cliffhanger like that!
gaytimestopover 1 year agoAuthorbienclar you just made my day, love that for a first comment lol. Sorry not sorry to leave y’all on a cliffhanger! May be awhile till the next chapter, it’s feeling like a long one, but it’s already coming along well. As always guys, thanks so much for reading. And please, if you’ve stuck with me this long don’t hesitate to comment or pm me, I love hearing from people.
Anonymousover 1 year agoOH FUCK, FUCK, FUCK! It wasn't enough that you had me on edge waiting for one of these guys to overdose on all of the drugs they were doing. Then I worried that Zach would walk in and find Sean and Dion having sex without him being there with them. But to end this chapter like this, OMG!!! This leaves so many questions. The main though is why he couldn't control the watch this time like in the past, by thinking it back into his hand. Of course, if Zach can gain control of the watch again, he can fix all this by turning back time. My head is spinning right now, so PLEASE, chapter #20 SOON. MLF
