by ENF_Asian
Sounds like female rape needs to be put in non-con one star for wrong category
You've just taken your first steps into a much larger universe/neighborhood. Don't sweat the small stuff, all pets are leashed till house broken
Thank you Maddict!
I haven't thought too much about where to go from here, but I'm hoping I get some more feedback and people tell me if they want more.
Perfect perfect story... and this is only the 1st chapter
can't wait for the rest of it.
i really liked it much.
the details and everything you put in it.
please continue
Concise. Few, if any, grammatical or spelling errors which is a real treat these days. Well developed plot with room to grow. Well done, ENF_Asian.
Thank you so much for your positive comments, I will continue the story :)