All Comments on 'Tina, the Tease, in Denial'

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PappasleazePappasleaze29 days ago

this chapter seems more like an after thought of the last chapter. seems like the middle of the 1st chapter i gave 3 stars and we will see what the next chapter holds.,

PappasleazePappasleaze29 days ago

sorry about last post, I realized I read the last two chapter out of order .

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I'm here to become a better writer. Erotica is a perfect avenue -- know your audience, write with passion, use what you know, exercise/exorcise your imagination. I love feedback and do my best to respond to suggestions that fit the characters. Or, I'll just fold them into anot...

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