All Comments on 'Tina's Sleepover Ch. 01'

When I saw 10 pages, I was instantly hesitant to continue. When I got to page 2 and discovered a razor burnt pussy that will be stubble and pimples in a day or so, I just stopped reading and rated it a 3 because at best shaved pussy is just average.

Spectacularly written, what a fantasy! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

This dude has zero agency and is just a simp for his whorish wife and daughter, isn't he?

Are we even reading the same story? By the end of this chapter (page 10),

1. Jenna, his "daughter", has not slept with ANYONE -- at all. She probably has fooled around with her girlfriend Tina.

2. Tina has NOT fucked her father -- yet, at least.

3. No evidence that the mother/wife has fucked anyone -- yet.

As for mysogyny -- not seeing it, unless, of course, women are only allowed to have the fantasies that YOU authorize.

(As for any unsightly stubble -- I'm sure that Tina used only the gentlest of depilatories.)

I'm really not into the rough stuff - it's a real turn-off for me. I do understand that there are those who do like it, and that you don't write for only me. :) So, 4 stars from me, and now you know why. :)

Thank-you for the story - I mostly enjoyed it, and I'll continue reading the series, unless you get too rough.

cool, lovin this!! well written,,nice beginning,,hints of much more to come,,,janet is no dummy and neither is her daughter,,they planned all this and hubby Doug is the happy recipient!! he is def falling for tina but of course very much in love with his wife,,and that is only natural!!

FROM THE AUTHOR - NOTE TO READERS -- This Chapter 1 is now corrected, and so you can now read the next Chapter -- Chapter 2 -- in the normal sequence. Hoping you enjoy (both chapters!), cv andrews

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Why the f**k are people who have moral/religious issues with sex fantasies attracted to this site? After years of reading their pathetic drivel, I'm convinced that they must believe that if they complain loudly enough their version of a deity will ignore the cum on their keyboard and give them extra credit.

Thank you, "Anonymous" of Jan. 14, 2024. Yes, I, too, wonder what people who go to a website whose name is, literally, "Literotica.com," are expecting. Are they shocked to find accounts of people having non-marital sex, and that stories that are labeled "Incest/Taboo" depict sexual behavior among people who are (gasp!) related? And are these the same people who are shocked -- yes, SHOCKED! -- to find out that there is gambling in the casino?