All Comments on 'Tina's Sleepover Ch. 02'

I really like this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. But in this part you made a big mistake. Never brew a coffee with distilled water. First, it's not healthy for your body, because it needs the minerals in the water. And second, the aroma of the coffee need the minerals to pass over into the water. With distilled water you get only a colored water. Instead you should use a bottled drinking water.

Well done and well played and an interesting turn of events. Cheers