All Comments on 'Tina's Sleepover Ch. 04 - Jen... and Me'

What happened to “Lani and me and Cassie story?” It’s unfinished. I’m sure many readers would love to see the continuation and the conclusion. So exciting story. I gave you 5 stars on it.

Wow! Very sexy, very erotic story. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, especially Janet's adventures.

D&A

just love the hell oiut of this tale,,so well written,,very erotic,,sometimes dougs character is too mealy mouthed and needs to be more agressive with his girls,,another disappointment is a lack of what janet is doing while away,,jen is not very forthcoming about her and her mothers visit to the cousins that started all this tale..

Slowly it's getting boring. And you should look for an editor. There are missing so many comma, that some sentences are impossible to read.