All Comments on 'To Be Loved By A Succubus Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good twist with the multiple personalities, but it's obvious Mason is sucked dead and dry within the next chapter or two. I don't beed ti read any more to know that.

HeroesdeadHeroesdead5 months agoAuthor

That's not where this story is going at all.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More than 10 orgasms for poor Mason. If only! I want my own succubus! Like this one, not the ones that are in many other stories where I die after sex.

Please keep writing. I do prefer the shorter stories if that means that you can post more often. This story was about half as long as the previous but if that means the second "half" will come sooner, I prefer that over waiting for several months.

E3_SierraE3_Sierra5 months ago

I LOVE this story!!! More please and soon

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Another outstanding entry into a fascinating world! Love the description of the “double dose”! That was so hot!

Can’t wait to see Lucene grow into her sexuality. Where will she go??? Dominant? Adventurous? Kinky?

I can imagine a scenario where Lucia and Lucy want to help Lucene “feed” so they rock Mason over and over (triple dose??) and just before he cums with Lucy or Lucia they change back to Lucene so she basically has the experience of flashing in and out of consciousness with Mason repeatedly feeding her over and over. Just an idea. Again, great work and please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

superb. Really liked all of the chapters. Thanks for making the effort, its most appreciated. More please....

Aussie1951Aussie19515 months ago
Good story but

I can see what you’re trying to do with this story but You need to expand your storyline in my opinion. Not just a three in one succubus. You’ve done the ground work, the mason the wealth etc now to utilise them. Especially if he’s going to turn into one of them eventually, like they stated. There’s so much more you can do to this story. With all the wealth he has he should upgrade his job buy the company he works for and get even with his arsehole boss for a start.. If he’s going to turn into a succubus why not fuck Megan and others as well to satisfy his needs.. just a thought..

HeroesdeadHeroesdead5 months agoAuthor

Damn, some of you seriously overestimate my story telling abilities. Lol.

UnaturalDeviantUnaturalDeviant5 months ago

I love this story and love gour characters. The romance is at a perfect amount. Tell your story how you feel it should be. I love the girls and the patience Mason has for each of them. Please continue on!

Prydonian71Prydonian714 months ago

Just my luck to discover this series with only 4 parts out... good stuff. :D

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