by The Mystic
I have read this story many times. I enjoy it very much. I really would like to hear follow up stories or more like it. I think more people don't write comments is they may be afraid or shy to say they enjoy the rape fantasy.
I have also read your other stories, You are my favorite writer on this site. I never write comments but I can't find
another writer like you. I keep checking for new stories. But nothing yet. why did you stop?
Intimate scenes were written nicely, but the protagonist was beyond irritating; half the time, I couldn't tell where the female lead's head was at; if she hated/wanted/loved Jeff. Writer also kept mentioning 'rape' even though that was clearly not the case, which was aggravating, and we received little background on the previous relationship.
Nice premise (bad boy ex), but bad delivery.