All Comments on 'To Have a Sweetheart - David Ch. 01'

All good until the last bit. Did John leave the scars on his back? Am totally confused to what was meant. It wasn't even explained why he was depressed or in pain or whatever was meant.

Sorry, too much and destroyed a nice story because it made no sense.

@UltimateHomeBody

Ty for the feedback - I'm taking a wild guess that you didn't read the 00chapter? I'm starting to realise I left too much vital information there and should have numbered it ch.1 and this one ch.2, but whoopsie.

And if you did read it, well then... double my bad...

Anyways thanks, always appreciate a word or two :)

While the source of the scarring had crossed my mind, David's little "kicker" in the closing paragraphs took me quite by surprise. Very much looking forward to the next chapter as I continue to catch up.

I like the story so far, I just have one note: I notice you keep using “drown” in place of “down”. Like how it should say that David “downs” a drink. But other than that, I’m interested to see what happens next!

Wow!