by Mircalla
That was excellent, wonderfully written. Slow, sensual but building up to a glorious climax. Absolutely superb!
....for any man who has ever wondered "what does a woman want". Since nearly all of your sentences begin with "I want", that answers the question. Beautifully written!
Had to reread this a second time. To hot to only read once ! Excellent !
Maybe I should send this to my boyfriend... it's exactly what I want. Very well written.