All Comments on 'To The Victor Go the Spoils'

Way way too long! Too much bullshit inane chatter between the 2 while she's in the tub. Please get with an Editor to learn how to wrote an erotic story. This missed the mark by a long ways. It's in the First Time category why????? You wrote they'd been fucking for a while but shed never Been with a woman. Well we still haven't read about that or any other sex romps.

1 star

DragonRider55