All Comments on 'Together Again'

This is a lovely romance story, but its brevity is a drawback. It could have been better with a more extensive introduction to the characters, and a longer build-up. The love scene is beautifully written, but is rather too short, and obviously left unfinished, as indicated by the words, "the break is only temporary, and soon we'll be back at it again". This could be rectified by another chapter; hopefully, the excellent author will be able to do so in the near future.