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Anonymous5 months ago

O.K. CLEVER WRITER, would you consider stories written about the same characters, being grouped together as chapters ? But ! Hey ! Great job as you are just getting started. KEEP writing ! 5 STARS.

SirKevin 2 months ago

"Look at me," Jo said, asking, not commanding, and Evie met her gaze. "There's pleasure on your face and I'm the author," Jo said, her voice husky, and Evie nodded.

Stellar. You put words to one of my favorite emotional experiences during physical intimacy.

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I'm a confident guy in his forties. For work, I do high-stress stuff--disaster response--and I love the ability of sex to take us into another world, strip away life's stresses, and give us a moment of pure bliss. I'm about enthusiastic consent and sex-positivity. I'm 5'11",...

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