All Comments on 'Toilet Ex Ch. 03 - My GF Punishes Me'

Hallo EmSmith!

In Toilet Ex Ch. 03 - My GF Punishes Me, (Lesbian Sex!) I was kinda hoping for a little more lesbian sex!

Thank you, 5-Stars!

Gay Kat

Hello Anonymous, thank you for giving me 5-Stars! The "Category" of storyline here is "Femdom", but sadly Literotica don't recognise feminist porn as a valid "Category". Vanilla sex with my partner is way less fun than sexually destroying my abusive Ex husband. (Ooops... I'm probably not allowed to say that here?) But here in this chapter... my Girlfriend takes our love into a new dynamic. Sorry it's a bit short & soft but the only way I can 'publish' any of my work is by softening and re-submitting, softening & re-submitting many times to get past the Literotica "moderator" censors.

Opinion with minor spoilers:

Hm, its a good story but having read the last two parts (unless 5 isn't the last?) It kind of hits and misses in my opinion. It would be a buzzkill to list out all the terrible things I assume this Rob did and quite possibly put off the reader, yet at the same time its hard to feel any catharsis at the end of the story. In summary they were both alphas to eachother and didn't get along, and now that they finally do and it comes as sort of a redemption ark for Rob. He swallowed his pride because he misses her dearly, which shows some growth as a person, and to just having Jen come in and ruin that just to get off sort of comes off as a super shitty thing to do, or at least makes it hard to root for Jen and Emily as a pair.

Also forgive the grammatical errors, I was piecemealing some thoughts together and didn't think there wouldn't be an edit feature after posting.

sentence 3: 'do and it' -> 'do, it'

sentence 3: 'redemption ark' -> 'redemption arc'

sentence 4: ', and to just having Jen' -> '; to have Jen'

Thanks Evrueliu! I get endlessly trolled by conflicted misogynist men where I'm forced to turn-off commenting, so it's delightful to get real & insightful feedback! Sorry to leave you 'hanging, and yes... you've correctly identified that something unforgiveable was enacted by Rob in the past. Teaser: it wasn't Emily he raped. Ha-ha... I'm trying to finish my story here and move on, but the enormous problem I have is that the Literotica fun-police censors (probably male) won't let me castrate my villain. You've correctly identified that Rob was awash on an 'ark' with no land or love in sight until he came back to lick his cherished Emily's gorgeous ass and resign himself permanently to her, whatever it takes. Jenny however is on a crusade of real & permanent punishment, subjugation, and en-slavery... like Delilah inflicted upon the arrogance of Samson when she cut out his balls: so she and others could laugh at him chained up naked & castrated in the local temple. Samson & Delilah was probably a true story... and would have been deeply erotic for Delilah!! I hope our friends at Literotica will allow me to finish my story. Thanks for your insight ;D

Dear Literotica... we desperately need a 'Femdom' or 'Feminist' category!! Women are avid readers too... and you would perhaps receive a lot less angry misogynist complaints against our literary art if you would only allocate a dedicated 'Category' where we could openly express our sexual fantasia within a category/frame where men wouldn't be openly exposed-too unless they were actively seeking to enter "our World". In my experience 'Lesbian Sex' is benignly both a male and female fantasy, and really doesn't get down to the real gristle & juices... 0+

Jenny sounds divine!! Easy to see why you dumped your ex male. Supremo pussy power O+

I would love serving as both of your slave. Let me move in and sleep on the floor

Your story is c escalating nicely, love the spanking and the addition of lesbian sex is indeed a bonus as are the orgasms, bravo!

Please also let her cut off his balls! (As a man it makes me shudder but also excites me!) The ultimate de masculinisation!

On to the next episode!!…