by Westman99
Perfect, well written story! I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you! It didn’t showed that this is your first dual dialogue story. Please write a sequal.
IT WAS A GREAT STORY, AS FAR AS IT WENT. I GUESS, I'M NOT ONE FOR STORIES LONGER
THAN FIVE PAGES.
YOU'LL NEED ANOTHER INSTALLMENT-PART 2 TO COMPLETE THE STORY. IF YOU DO SO,
I HOPE THEY GET MARRIED AND LIVE A HAPPY LIFE.
IN THIS TORN UP WORLD WE'RE LIVING IN, WE NEED MORE STORIES WITH A HAPPY ENDING.
I'M A 75 YEAR-OLD MAN WHO IS AN INCURABLE ROMANTIC.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
I really liked the story. I did experience some apprehensions concerning their lack of consideration for birth control.The sequel must involve marriage and family. DON'T STOP NOW!!!
Nice, sensitive young sexual romance but the past tense kills the energy. Retell it in an active voice and it becomes much more engaging.