All Comments on 'Tom and Teresa... Will They?'

by Westman99

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_flat__flat_over 1 year ago

Perfect, well written story! I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you! It didn’t showed that this is your first dual dialogue story. Please write a sequal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

IT WAS A GREAT STORY, AS FAR AS IT WENT. I GUESS, I'M NOT ONE FOR STORIES LONGER

THAN FIVE PAGES.

YOU'LL NEED ANOTHER INSTALLMENT-PART 2 TO COMPLETE THE STORY. IF YOU DO SO,

I HOPE THEY GET MARRIED AND LIVE A HAPPY LIFE.

IN THIS TORN UP WORLD WE'RE LIVING IN, WE NEED MORE STORIES WITH A HAPPY ENDING.

I'M A 75 YEAR-OLD MAN WHO IS AN INCURABLE ROMANTIC.

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Magnificent. wish it had gone that smoothly for us..

Cal59Cal59over 1 year ago

Really liked this, thanks

AnnaValley11AnnaValley114 months ago

Excellent - just found this and it was delightful. Well done

Newt0351Newt0351about 1 month ago

I like a good romantic story this fits the bill.

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

I really liked the story. I did experience some apprehensions concerning their lack of consideration for birth control.The sequel must involve marriage and family. DON'T STOP NOW!!!

RightSizedRightSized8 days ago

Nice, sensitive young sexual romance but the past tense kills the energy. Retell it in an active voice and it becomes much more engaging.

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English Male...mature. Late 60's. I have been in two long term relationships but am now single. I have three adult children. I have been reading stories on here for a while and thought I would have a look around. Recently tried my hand at writing....happy for you to give const...