All Comments on 'Tomboy Takes Charge'

Excellent! My only criticism is that I think he resisted the activity a bit too long to be believable. Lust would have taken over much sooner.

That was fun 😀 I hope you can get up for another chapter. Jessie is a interesting young lady.

I love how you write about reluctance. I'm addicted to your stories.

I wish you draw out the writing of the orgasm more -- like how it feels, how he spasms, what the girl sees, etc.

Soo hot! Would love to read more about this relationship