All Comments on 'Tom's Parallel World Pt. 05'

Interesting story. though I'm not liking how the MC is sleeping with some women then helping other guys get into relationships with said women. But that is because I love harems so I'll read a few more chapters before I stop or not. It is a good story and hope you continue for a long time.

looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

i really enjoyed this chapter but i wish they closer together

Keep it up. Really enjoying the story.

Now that you’ve submitted your winter holiday entry, is there any chance that we’ll get more entries here?

I think we all have real life issues going on these days, so I’m just glad that you haven’t disappeared entirely, but I’d really like to read more of this story

So this story is abandoned? The chapters were 3,3,5,7 weeks apart and now it’s 3 months.

Anyway abandoned or not it’s unreadable when you have months long chapter breaks anyway. You have to remember the story and then hunt it down and then reread the previous chapter and it’s such a hassle. With regular releases a reader can put the effort to remember the release will be coming up and to read it and keep up with the story and so you get lots of readers. Long delays mean readers dropping off and your relying on people stumbling upon it more and more often for new readers and to keep your numbers up.

I appreciate the story and your effort but it’s half done and no answers for anything about what’s happening to the main guy. So in that regard you haven’t really written a story at all but rather a trailer or whatever the book version of a trailer is.

But if there is more I’ll definitely read it as the trailer was fun and intriguing.

[12.12.22]

Good sh1+e!

11/10!!!!!

Captain Tom will be along once we have breakfast done," Tom warned her, trying not to give anything away to Brenda.

Is it not captain Brown, tom cant se him self or can he.