All Comments on 'Tom's Parallel World Pt. 06'

Really love this story. Please update soon

Very good, engaging writing. You keep everything and everyone straight, and me not confused. That's not an easy thing to do. Plus, there's mystery and a nefarious plot AND all of the sex with different partners to keep up with! And our Tom is slowly turning into an at-will merman with a mermaid girlfriend. Ya got yer hands full. I can't read fast enough. Thanks.

[12.12.22]

Excellent chapter!

Love the further transformation to Tom.

One small niggle...'cybermen' should be capitalised.

11/10!!!!!

I seriously can’t tell you how much I enjoy reading and re-reading this series

[08.12.23]

I mentioned the Cybermen thing before, but forgot to mention that you mentioned their 'knock-offs' the Borg.

Still 11/10!!!!!