All Comments on 'Too Far! Ch. 01'

A bit brief, but with tempting possibilities ahead. Skillful writing. Don't make us wait too long!

... you have done a fine job of starting! This was a really well-crafted and fascinating story and I look forward to reading Chapter 02 as soon as you can get it posted.

Welcome - and well done!

Mean (fat comment all because she found the girls personality annoying) arrogant (house comment) and vindictive, seems like shes the one that needs a good spanking. Also the fact that she verbally attacked a girl for no reason... other than she doesn't like other girls... sounds to me like a jealous, premature, insecure, petulant child.

Enjoyed the story, keep it going. Don't make us, the readers, wait too long before posting.

I loved this story, I hope you keep writing! It did seem mean of her to insult the other girl in the first place, even if it was the truth, but that's really my only complaint with this story so far. It was very entertaining and she seems like an interesting character, someone with lots of suprises. I really hope you keep this story going.

For a first timer just a little over the top. But still a good read. Thanks for sharing.