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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You constant switching between past and present tenses was distracting from an otherwise cute little story

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Welcome. So first of English is not my first language. If you find any errors, grammatik mistakes or whatever, please let me know. I'd like to improve my writing and pointing out the mistakes I make will help me. Thank you.