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Colleges don't have principals, they have deans. Otherwise not a bad start

The story ended and we didn't find what the program was? What was with the eyes changing colour? Who was controlling whom? Needs another chapter delving into the program. Otherwise if that was the intended ending it doesn't work for me.

Just going to reply to both comments here:

Yea remembered it being dean and principal shortly after I pressed publish for the chapter, but decided to not go through the publishing wait time to edit it to fix it.

As for the program itself, I am working on a prequel of sorts, focusing solely on Nancy and her descent through the entire program. Most of the questions you asked would be answered in that prequel. Probably going to be awhile until that chapter is out though.

Greta story. Hope it continues

Loved the story can’t wait for the prequel, don’t keep us waiting to long!