All Comments on 'Total Domination Ch. 01'

Enjoyed this story immensely. What an inheritance - an Amulet with mystical powers. Just what every man needs to facilitate his sex life. This Writer's first work of fiction reads like the real life experiences he has written about in earlier stories. Sensuous and hot! Terrific Write!

Amulet

A lot of these stories get out of hand. I like the idea and wish it were real. Back to my opinion. Keep the steady girlfriend satisfied first and have a little fun but not to much to make her look bad.

Great start to what i hope will be a long series about every man's fantasy.

I hate the 'coffin nails' scenes. 'He lit is marlboro and fiddled with his cock'...lol. Hate the idea of a virile man then snogging someone's face with yellow smoked teeth and breath like an ashtray. Having said that, loved the rest of the tale. Oh, and as a woman, I am into panty sniffing too. I sneak a sniff at panties in linen baskets and locker rooms - the latter much stronger after workout. I'm rare but more women I have found out do it, just like more women are trying a walk on the wild side and 'shopping directly' lol. Sof x

I liked the more realistic panty stuff better than the mind control stuff. But you should keep writing whatever turns you on.

-BR