All Comments on 'Total Hedonism Pt. 03 - Bath Time!'

Another chapter in this on-going love story is so well done that it holds the reader's attention from start to finish. This is because the author is able to engage the reader so well with the characters, and the way the love scene in this chapter is approached in a completely different way, while at the same time adhering to the overall romantic atmosphere of the story. Absolutely marvelous writing.