All Comments on 'Total Woman Bluewater Maiden'

Too many names, too many girls, too many guys. No real story. Just simple fucking. There are a million of other stories like this. Please keep focused on your great and unique idea of TWA academy with events like father daughter weekend.

You can probably focus on building a long series. Why not start with chapter two (three, four...) of "Neighbourhood" instead?

We all know you can create great series!

bhuff I enjoyed the "smorgasbroad" and found Sam to be the most delicious. Reading about her moral boost activities with Captain Ron et al and of course the Bluewater Maiden Auction would make a great dessert.

Total Woman Vignettes 01a continues Captain Ron and Sam's morale-boosting activities.