All Comments on 'Tough Lessons for a Scold'

This is non con and should be in the right category. You call yourself Mastersomething so you should know better.

This is way too expensive and stupid for real life. It would be much cheaper for him to help get her an apartment and leave her sitting in it, away from him. He's just showing off what he'd like to do. Beware this asshole writer.

It was really good until the end. She could walk into any hospital and get a rapekit done, then he's not off scot-free.

When she called the police she had everything she needed. Bruises, abrasions, DNA and a vagina and anus that had been abused. And he was STUPID enough to make a video that the police found in no time flat. He went to prison for the next 20 years. Stupid story.

No stars

Way Too Harsh

Not you, MasterBlogman, but the previous commenters are way too harsh on good MasterBlogman who is kind enough to share the outpourings of his imagination with us without asking anything in return but a comment or two. Once a reader’s decided a story is not to their taste, there’s no need to even finish. Is it just for the opportunity to say something nasty? After all, it’s not as if they’ve wasted any money, right? So thank you, MB, for sharing your wish fulfillment with us. As a constructive suggestion, I’ll pass along one I’ve received. You might consider reducing the verbiage a bit to tighten the overall tale. There’s the occasional superfluous word or phrase. An editing tip that writers often find helpful, is reading it aloud since your ears might pick up what your eyes skipped over.

It’s not journalism, a documentary, or a history book. It’s FICTION, and very arousing fiction at that. Woo hoo !

This is not journalism, a documentary, or a history book. This is FICTION - like Star Wars, or any superhero movie.

And vert arousing fiction indeed. WOO HOO!!