All Comments on 'Tower of Babylon Pt. 02'

by mrfudan

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Andi_ChaseAndi_Chasealmost 4 years ago
Another wonderful story

Ayo, I loved this one. My only complaint is that it jumps around a bit, and those jumps could be marked a little more clearly, but I love how you've evolved the setting.

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