All Comments on 'Town & County Confidential Ch. 03'
by WifeWatchman
- 14 Comments
tazz317over 2 years agothe paparazzi will always find made-up fault and tell it. TK U MLJ LV NV
madmaniacover 2 years agoOne question has been bugging me for a while now, is Officer Lydia Greene still around. Because I can remember a story you wrote were Cindy was interrogating someone and she was the Uniformed Presence in the room. Cindy said something about if he didn't co-operate with the TCPD that he would be found strung up near the University football field, sure enough the next day he was. I also remember a story were Teresa kicked her out of the room and replaced her. Is she one of the moles?
Anonymousover 2 years agoExcellent ending and a great start to yet another IC mystery. Wonder who will become the next victim?
WifeWatchmanover 2 years agoAuthorAnonymous/longer - I had to push to get the story done before the Spillane Challenge deadline; hence, the relatively short length. And I also don’t care to make them longer for the sake of making them longer. Quality over quantity.
madmaniac - yes, Lydia Green is still around. But is she the Mole? Time will tell…
Anonymousover 2 years agoThere are many ways to assassinate someone. The best way is to have someone go to a busy restaurant or bar for a meeting, slip them a slow acting poison or liquid drug while the wait and then after they eat or drink their silent killer, send them a note letting them know something came up and the meeting will have to be postponed for later. They go home, get ready for bed and die of a heart attack or stroke. The drug or poison will have been broken down by their body by the time someone finds them, being virtually untraceable. And if they are fat and out of shape, the autopsy will likely not be as thorough as the Medical Examiner will likely allow their biases creep into their examination of the dead body.
Officer Hendricks is a perfect recipient for this sort of assassination.
Anonymousover 2 years agoWonderful story as usual. I love Mickey Spillane even though I'm an Aussie!
Anonymousover 2 years agoGreat story as always, I have never read one of your stories that was not a 5*
Anonymousover 2 years agoI've enjoyed all of your stories, and am looking forward to more. You have a gift.
WifeWatchmanover 2 years agoAuthorThe first chapter of the new story 'Consent of the Governed' is submitted and hopefully will be published soon.
Ravey19about 2 years agoLoved the way you changed styles for this one, nice bit of work. Rutherford referred to "he" but in an earlier story you mentioned a woman sipping her fins sherry. It's obvious there's a deep mole within the TCPD , could it be someone like the officer who always seems to be guarding female perps, think her name is Lydia Green. But is it possible she's also the new Moriarty?
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