All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 09'

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Ilfen1Ilfen1almost 3 years ago

Hi, this was well written.

Like many here, I'm fascinated by this kind of lifestyle that rich people lead.

However I can't help thinking that that the way they are; forever chasing the next big drug-induced high, will inevitably follow with a catastrophic crash to the ground. It seems like the inevitable conclusion is ruin. Am I wrong?

If a bad ending is being foreshadowed, then I can't help but thinking that the "romantic" and "romance" tags do not jibe with that. I hope that John and Kat do get a relatively good ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was another great chapter, and I again give it 5 Stars. As I mentioned before, I hope that you can coax Kat into doing a slutty trick for John, and start to question where she gets the most satisfaction, from being a Traffic girl, or a paid coke whore. I'll vote for a Vegas high price coke whore for hire....but I'm just a pig...lol...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Pity Caitlyn has left the scene. She had a lot of potential for further use.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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