All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 10'

Getting better and better. Things are ready to go further.

OMG! 5 Stars!! This was one of the hottest chapters/scenes ever! You are a great erotic writer. I still hope he makes her a hooker for him. I think that's what Patrick did!

Lovely. Perhaps I wasn't on your wavelength. Maybe to the uninitiated the drugs seemed inherently bad, but perhaps what happens in Vegas really stays in Vegas.

Interesting story and definitely well written, but if there is anything but a train wreck waiting for these two at some point, its the story loses credibility. No one can sustain this level of coke without crashing. Also, if the gentlemen can afford this kind of life-style, how much more money does her boyfriend have that she is with him?

Yes, well, that all brings back some memories. It doesn't have to end up as a train wreck, but no one can run at that pace very long......... Of course, it is your story.

I thinks it's great to have a sexual tryst with someone who has similar appetites and that they are story telling. However John has far more control about himself whereas Kat admits several times she can completely lose it. I don't see how it's possible to sustain it for the long term. She admits she's a golddigger and John says and compare himself with Patrick to frequently. Nice to have fun, but no long term material since I think Kat is clearly mixed up/messed up in several ways.