All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 38'

the creampies have always been a great part, if the story moves into pregnancy risk and breeding I may have to find a sixth star

Appreciate it, coolstrangeravenue! Thank you for reading. There is going to be a LOT of debauchery in the next two books. I hope to keep up plot development, but I realize this is truly about the smut!

These girls do way too much coke to get pregnant. One hole in plot: a family with billions does background check on potential mates including following and electronic surveillance. No chance they would not know she was a coke whore in LA and continues to be in houston.

These girls need to go down into the dark side.

Good points, Xzy89c1! Appreciate the close read and feedback very much!

She is a devil in a human skin, the husband still clueless because he was just a one dimension character, serve as a comedic purpose of this deprave story. Hope he was finally aware like the other loving wives story and divorce the wife, that way I could find peace reading this story because for the past 38 chps, I'm waiting for the bitch burn

I love polyamory tales, full of fun and caring. Hopefully, you won’t take this down the typical Loving Wives rancorous rabbit hole. I like your characters and don’t want any of them hurt. I’m a big fan of longer submissions, and normally wouldn’t read or rate such brief stories, but fortunately there are dozens still for me to enjoy. Now if I had to wait between chapters, I’d probably skip reading until the series ended in order to maintain continuity. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I don't think it's cool of Kat that she completely cut John off, especially while still talking to Jess. Sure there are things that only women can relate to but it's a total lack of character. Not that Jess is a wonderful diversion, I think the nightmare for all of them only gets bigger and perhaps rightfully so.