All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Highway to Hell? Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This a nice start, but not bad enough punishment...she needs to be destroyed!! Her dishonesty is something he can't allow in his whores. She needs to be dominated for at least as long as she disappeared. Hang her up in the great room of the house, and leave her there to be used by all...for fees. Since she'll fuck Tommy without money, she needs to pay John for the earnings she lost!!!

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
Another 5 Star of Adventures - Never Boring Around That Carnival Fun House

You never fail to make it entertaining and an enjoyable read. Let The Good Times Roll! It is always interesting to see how low people will go to get their next sexual fix of the drug that sex can be to those that are in desperate need of the highs and lows they get from extreme sexual needs and release. These folks are truly on the Highway To Hell and that need for another drug and sexual fix. Drugs and sex both can be such an addiction that causes those involved in both to go to the ultimate edge to get their next high regardless of how bad for them or those around them. Love your GREAT story telling and look forward to where you take these kids on this wild ass adventure into even more outrageous sexual adventures. Load them all on the sexual roller coaster and send them on their way to sexual thrills up and down the rails of life. Always 5 Plus Stars. Cheers

A_K_3bxTmA_K_3bxTmover 2 years ago

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This story is fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really stupid now

ThorlolThorlolover 2 years ago

Huh. I dont get this guy. From his behaviour overall he doesnt really care about people in general. Even those close to them. I wouldnt be surprised when the time comes and one of those two will OD he would shrug it off and put the blame on them. Why would he care what they do in their free time. Its not like they are committed in any sense. He cant be deceived or humiliated by their actions.

Demented917Demented9179 months ago

Best way to punish them is to withhold sex and drugsā€¦.

EngravedScriptureEngravedScripture6 months ago

This is honestly very disappointing. They lie all the time and the best he can do is say 'Keep doing it again and again and all I will do is punish you' which is basically what they want. Does he have no backbone that he can't even set any real boundaries...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I agree with EngravedScripture, it's weak and pathetic. The real problem John has is that he can never say no, no matter what the circumstances are. Which imbecile willingly puts up with all this drama??? My apologies author, you want to write a good fantasy but the way you write about the character John isn't appealing nor believable.

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB4 months ago

Where did Johns balls go?

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...