All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Highway to Hell? Ch. 25'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this series, but… what challenges? You’ve been promising challenges for 100 chapters, and we’ve had a minor cheating scandal that was quickly brushed off, a girl who got slightly cold feet and abandoned in Vegas, and an attempted pregnancy trap that never had any real suspense to it.

Don’t get me wrong, this is a great story and I love the debauchery. But stop promising conflict if you’re not going to deliver.

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
Hopefully A New Spot To Crank Up The Debauchery

Maybe this is the spot where the three decide to it is time to speed up on the Highway To Hell Again. Time for the whores to let it fly at light speed with the coke, Molly, and Oxy. They seem ready to become drugged filthy nasty sexually activity young ladies that see it is now time to get all the large and controlling cocks they can get before they decide to settle down. These two sex fiends need to be used in all their holes and scream for more. Escorts with no limits. Just saying. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sad Day for your true fans. I must agree with the other commenter that I so love this series. With that said, and like them, where have all the promised challenges gone? They have never really panned out. They just want away. I have my opinion, and that is at Book 3, Chapter 14 on Dec 9 the author was attacked by the small minded and small dicked group of about 20 to 25 sad tolls that try to dominate this website. It is almost like the author felt they were referring to him as actually be John and a cuckold. If you go back and read the entire story changed at that point in time. Since then, it has started to lose what has been promised and now under deliverers. So, it seems that there is little any real suspense at this point of what will happen in order to avoid the haters. So sad that a small group can make great authors suddenly change course. Another sad day on this website. So, while this is a great story written by a great author there seems to be a real lack of true debauchery. So, time is here to either put up what was promised your fans at the beginning of each book or give the haters what they really love which is only accepting BTB and John gets his self a nice vanilla wife and moves to the great plains and rises the Walton family they all seem to wanted. Sad day for your true fans

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingover 2 years agoAuthor

Hang on, friends! It's always been a slow burn!

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
Yeah Chapter 26 is Coming Already

Thanks for the quick publishing of upcoming Chapter 26. I saw the announcement that it is pending. Yeah looking forward to the next exciting phase for these three. Yeah looking forward to what smut is to cum. Cheers

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingover 2 years agoAuthor

Chapter 27 is pending now, too. It was a hard slog to get through some of the plot that I really believed was necessary if the crescendo of this book, which we'll be moving into next, is really to make sense. Thanks for reading and the outstanding, insightful feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Write it as you will. This is a gripping and unusual story, full of sex, jealousy and betrayal. Please keep going.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...