All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Jess Ch. 10'

This is getting Hotter and Hotter. The drugs flowing, and the girls working to bring others in. What a feast of Hedonism you've created, and better and better it becomes! I think he needs Kelly to help them use some H to keep themselves mellow and gain dependency for him. Ultimately he creates a harem of willing serving whores, having his children and building a new financial empire with addicted sluts!

It's just so damn "the same thing" over and over.

Needs a major event to make things change. In the case of this story the major event caused things to revert to how they were..

And it’s all just so unrealistic that goes on and on. That billionaire or someone in his circle, would spot out this pathetic, desperate, coke fiend within a day and no fucking way would she walk away with 10s of millions after such a short time in a fake marriage.

We get it dude, you are writing the fantasy you wish you lived. But your fantasy is dam trite and boring.

Thanks for the feedback and thanks for reading. There is tons of great content here if this doesn't float your boat!

Ignore the annoying anonys. LLLB, just keep writing the story you want to tell. Good grief, it’s not like they’re doing any writing. If they don’t like it, then they don’t have to read it, do they? Jeepers, it bugs me to read people’s complaints in the comments. I’m not referring to constructive suggestions, but the ungrateful whining nonsense. Sorry for the rant, I’m done now. Anyway, thank you for sharing your talents with us, UNPAID, I might add. At least some of us appreciate your efforts. 🙏👏👍🏼🤩

Thanks so much for your kind comments! Greatly appreciated!

I like this story/ these stories.

My only problem is that it’s always too easy for the protagonist.