All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Jess Ch. 18'

I absolutely love this story!!!!!!!

I love the story, but I’m not a fan of the direction it’s going. It’s just becoming an orgy with no structure. The girls fucking everyone anytime just doesn’t work.

There will be a lot of structure moving forward, but we've got to have some fun to get there! There's a definite end point in mind. It won't just be a wild batch of insanity, although I think these characters sure lend themselves to some crazy times!

Great!

Thank you very much for spending the time and energy that you have to bring us this exquisite story. I find it so enthralling that I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I check first thing every morning. And congratulations for the way you keep it interesting, fresh, and surprising. The main characters and their interactions - wow!

Please don’t hurry to conclude this story. Make it as long as you care to.

Appreciate the amazing feedback, everyone! Thank you!!

Only place jess ends up is a cemetery

I have to say, you have taken my emotions on a wild roller coaster ride with this 2nd book. This chapter especially. Rarely do I find myself emotionally invested in a story or the characters. I felt the betrayal, the disappointment, and even as this chapter grew to a close with their resolution to the problem, I find that I still feel incredibly betrayed by both Jess and Kat, maybe that's jut me imposing my value system on the main character, but I can't help but know that this is a slow motion trane wreck happening all at once, and everyone is going to feel it's impact catastrophically. I hope I'm wrong, but damn it has me on edge. I haven't been able to put this damn story down for 3 days. I've only managed a few hours sleep, everyone is pissed at me for being so distracted. I've not read many things before that have so effectively consumed me. Your one he'll of a good writer. There had been the odd grammatical error and I substituted for she here and there but I overlook those minor irritations. Excellent work

Incredibly kind of you -- thank you for reading! There is some drama through this book and the next ... perhaps particularly Book 3. But if you love these characters and stay with it, I hope you'll find it pays off!

Jess drags Katt into her lies willingly. If there was ever time for an alarm bell going off it would be now! Who on earth would put up with this kind of shit???

The story becomes so unrealistic that the story tags should include scifi/ non-human!!!

I would dump Jess immediately and rethink having a child with Kat.