All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Juliet Ch. 28'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderfully well written with such excitement and longing for desire. Five Stars for the connection these three shared in the sexual experience. Fucking hot as hell.

Not2PervyNot2Pervyabout 1 year ago

Damn, Man! That was the first one of your stories I’ve read. It won’t be the last!

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 year ago
Awesome 5 Star Trip

What an awesome trip for the trio in so many ways. The details of describing the travel and fun of the trip as well as the details of the mushroom trip and sexual adventures was top shelf entertainment. So well done and the emotions of everyone. An outstanding chapter that was full for joy from start to finish. The trio seems to have had a blast and relaxed at the same time. Thanks for you valuable time to publish this top rated series. And it ended with an always fun teaser and a what is coming down the line hook. Cheers

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind words! Always happy to hear feedback, positive or constructive!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

That is exactly how the Joshua Tree area should be enjoyed and the right drug and crazy sexual experience with a threesome. That is it to the letter. Best story for that area felt like I was there. 5 shroom rating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Who is Joshua, and why does he have a tree? Why go away for two hours to just sit stoned in bed? They could have stayed comfortably at Juliette’s house to do the same thing, same result.

John should have stayed home and handled his business with Jess, That’s a situation that needs fixing sooner than later. He could have finally had time with Kat, Rita and the kids. Talk about absent father.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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