All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Juliet Ch. 36'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Success!!! A plan well executed!!! Savoring the victory!!!

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 year ago
Drama

Drama at its best. Well played and happy results for the family and now they can move on and party hard. Success will no doubt make this group very horny and ready to roll. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a great wrap to difficult drama. A family’s plan well executed.

I can’t help to find several places in this chapter that could have potentially led to perverted fun for the ladies. Rita especially walked the edge of carrying out the plan and teasingly hinting at her fetish.

I find the ladies, (except Jess), have really calmed down too much. Jess needs to get some control of herself, while the others need to let loose at the parties. It would be nice to have more men at the parties for the ladies so that they don’t all turn lesbian.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No matter how sophisticated your home security system is, you won't build it or place it in a neighborhood with a high crime rate. That's what people these days call toxic masculinity, but they probably can't call John that way after reading how he's treated his women all along, but still, I'm glad that he hasn't completely forgotten his role as a man, doesn't want to put his women in dangerous situations, no matter how safe it is.

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingabout 1 year agoAuthor

Appreciate the great comments! And for my friend wanting more spice ... it's coming. It's definitely coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It would be perfect if John landed one punch to Manny's jaw lol.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I like the scheme they put together as family, obviously it was 2 against 5 and those pornstars are not the brightest ones, not that I give the other ones very high IQ's. That Jess needs help with a problem that's basically of her own making fine, but under no circumstances would it considered to be normal to let a loved one (Rita) in mental let alone physical danger. Honestly this all sound like amateur hour. Why not hire a true Pro, an alluring woman with serious combat skills? Lack of imagination????

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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