All Comments on 'Transformation'

Yes, force, game, power, restraint, tears, ... These needed to be deeper, stronger, more forceful, more everything. There just wasn't enough depth to this. It wasn't overwhelming enough.

Because it wasn't "overwhelming enough" it wasn't really "non-consent" When she said that she was restrained by "her lover" the reader knew that the actions were "consented" Still and all: a good read