All Comments on 'Transformations - Rose Ch. 08'

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The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Onealmost 5 years ago

Ok that's not what I expected. I would like to see what happens when they get to the farm. But some part of me thinks that second in command of a pimp is going to be cooped by the church. The pimp though what happened to the guy who worked for Constance who killed like a mild disagreement between friends. Maybe the same thing will happen to him as Stan. But either way he is in for a world of pain

milkyrosemilkyrosealmost 5 years ago
;)

that was SO hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fantastic

Great story, Really great! Keep it up!

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_mealmost 5 years ago
Do you...

Have a time frame for the next chapter?

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
It could have been...

I love this story, but I'm a bit confounded by this chapter, it seemed to want to go in a couple of different directions and felt incomplete as none of the directions were fulfilled... Make sense? As always, thank you so much for sharing your stories with us!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 5 years ago
Ass doesn’t taste delicious.

It tastes of iron and fecal matter.

Except for this....idiotic thought, it was a good read. But that one line ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Lisa has to be one of my favorite characters of the whole series, and you keep developing her better each chapter. Can't wait for the ride to the farm and Stan's makeover. Keep up the great work!

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionalmost 5 years agoAuthor
A few notes

Yes, the story is bouncing around a bit. This is paving the way for a new book, Transformations : The Farm which will return the action to the original farmhouse from Witnesses, and rejoin Gwen and Alex. Our chapters are broken up into pieces that cover two to three pages on lit, sometimes it leaves a bit of a cliff hanger.

As for the taste of analingus, cleanliness is a necessity.

We will put up the next chapter tomorrow; however, keep in mind it usually takes four days for the story to be approved.

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Chapter 9

... is in the queue. Look for it in about four days.

milkyrosemilkyrosealmost 5 years ago
;)

I love your series. I really do. Are we ever going to hear more about Amber & the messed up things in DC or Brittany and the gym? I'm a millennial I binge things.

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Amber and the New Gym

Yes, you will definitely see Amber later on.

The current plan is to finish The New Gym after Rose and then move on to The Farm.

I wish we could support your binge cravings, Milky, but there are only two of us 😉. The stories planned so far are, in no particular order :

The New Gym finale

The Farm (book)

Dr. De-Mona (book)

Stacie Does Suburbia (book)

Trixie (short)

The Sorority (book)

A Transformations Christmas (short)

Tyffany Twysted (book)

Morpheus (book)

Dry Run (book)

Travelers (book)

Lilith in Havana (book)

La Noche de las Brujas (book)

Gods and Bimbos (book)

tarthearttartheartalmost 3 years ago

Are you dudes still writing? Did 2020 just ruin everything?

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