All Comments on 'Travel Log of a Very Curious Elf'

You should continue the story👀, hope to see more adventures ahead

What an excellent story! I love the story concept, and the prose is great too! With the character names and your mentions of 'Rosy-fingered dawn', I can see some of your inspirations, which is enjoyable. The descriptions of centaur cock were very hot (in both senses!). The story also had an emotional core that was a bit unexpected but quite nice. I'm very much hoping for more stories from you, either sequels to this (it seems sort of set up for that) or unrelated ones

This is a good first submission. I do love me worldbuilding that a) takes itself seriously, and b) dodges trite stereotypes. Your centaur lore vaguely reminds me of a project that sadly feel through; I don't know if you have plans for further stories in the universe, but I enjoy these little details.

I feel this could have been made longer to better pace the plot. The audience has only got a glimpse of Ariadne's tribe before Liriel is whisked away by Atalanta, who after a single fuck pours out her heart to a total stranger. A little more time to familiarize with the characters, more time for them to build up a rapport, would strengthen the emotional thread.