by Moon Glade
I liked the first parts a lot, but the 3rd's kind of iffy. It's a personal preference, but I never felt the need for the husband to "push" her into action in these stories.
Let mes guess, at some point will he have her recreate that first night Martin's wife went through all those years ago? That might be good.
Great story especially since it chronicles the real life adventure of Suzie, Jeremy and Martin (so far). Can see how husband who acts like a horses ass can be a catalyst for a wife to rebel and act out secret or hidden desires and fantasies. Reminds me of a couple of couples I know.
Nice writing style. Sure know how to keep ones interest.
Looking forward to the next chapters.
. . . from a woman scorned and most especially scorned by her husband!
You are both very immature, not able to communicate effectively, argue in a manner that causes the other to escalate and get hard hearted. You certainly got what you deserved.