All Comments on 'Treatment Ch. 01'

She has such a great memory that she “almost forgot” to tell her to strip?!? And where’s the signed consent forms?

Holy fuck dude. I dont know how stupid you are; but you should stick to jerking off to pictures of your mom because she’s the only woman who could possibly love someone as dumb as you.

I thought this story was a refreshing read, I don't know what Whackdoodle is talking about. It's a fantasy story about a brainwashing drug, sorry if it wasn't as thoroughly realistic and consistent as you expected.

Hope to see more parts loved the story great work.

Whackdoodle: absolutely uncalled for. No one asked. Would love to see your work so we can all judge it.

Some parts are pretty blatantly plagiarised from Jukebox, especially the bit about no clocks in the room, almost word for word stolen.

At least put some effort into the development of the story. Most of your world/character building is plagiarised then as soon as she's injected she instantly gives up and gets sexed. The end. Wow what a story