All Comments on 'Trip to the Doctors'

by AndrewRichards

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
age issues

26 with a 17 year old son????? Very doubtful he was a father at age 9.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OK but too rushed

I guess the guy was married for 26 years, not 26 years old - d'oh! This coulda been a better story if it had been better paced, not quite so frantic. But I enjoyed it, thanks for submitting it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
core of a good story here, but. . .

It is so desperately in need of editing that it makes it very difficult to read and enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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Stupid fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

So he had his son when he was 9?

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