by AndrewRichards
It is so desperately in need of editing that it makes it very difficult to read and enjoy it.
I guess the guy was married for 26 years, not 26 years old - d'oh! This coulda been a better story if it had been better paced, not quite so frantic. But I enjoyed it, thanks for submitting it
26 with a 17 year old son????? Very doubtful he was a father at age 9.