All Comments on 'Trip with her Brother's Friends'

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Not bad but clearly you had a point A, Point C, Point D, but didn't really have a way to connect them so just jumping around.

A heads up about the mind control and degrading treatment at the beginning of the story would have been nice. I'm forced into voting down to a 1/5 because I wasted my time reading halfway through something that I wouldn’t have ever started had I known the content and subject matter beforehand. 😠

I wish you would have made a series out of it. Where she struggled with becoming her Big Brothers needy whore.