by das4200
this is a great story and i would love for it to be longer with more to read
I have to agree with the anon though, please starting writing the stories to be longer, you've got a great plot and I'm insatiable!
But I only got to the second chapter before I started having a lot to do and couldn't get online to read anymore. So I picked up reading again and I have to say by the end of this chapter I'm very interested. I just hope the others are longer.