So there are a number of grammatical errors, but they are not the type that get in the way of enjoying a story that has a steady flow and that is entertaining. Well done.
Lifelong CD, non-binary, fluid, pan - kinky for play and lots of tight and shiny stuff. I love skirts, dresses, leggings, swimsuits, wetsuits, straps, straitjackets… If my avatar caught your eye you should check out my Amateur Pics Feedback thread - there’s a link in my foru...