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so the cuck paid the whore a million dollars to stay married for another year so the cuck could film the whore having sex with other men a few more times?

No pathos.

I have this vision of the author sat at his desk thinking ‘I want to create the most obnoxiously entitled male character ever’. Well Jimmy goal achieved…yawn!

Hey-ho moving on to the next.

Pussy

Yes, the mc is a pussy. These women obviously looked at him and saw him for the weak, simpering suckered that he is. What's the point of making the point of prenuptial punishing adultery and then rewarding the sluts for breaking that particular article? Not sure what the author is trying to say but it comes across as a very weak willed character. His father must be soo ashamed.

I hate stories that start with this is my name and this is how I look, work, act, and why I was such a perfect husband. No one cares, just tell your story.

The only reason I didn't give it a five is because the MC pussied out on taking the wives to the cleaners. They do the second worse thing you can do to another person and they deserve nothing. Neither marriage was very long, no kids and they both hung on for the money. I don't get why writer's lay out horrible betrayals, then offer helping their exes.

The only reason I didn't give it a five is because the MC pussied out on taking the wives to the cleaners. They do the second worse thing you can do to another person and they deserve nothing. Neither marriage was very long, no kids and they both hung on for the money. I don't get why writer's lay out horrible betrayals, then offer helping their exes.

Sorry man, but I honestly don’t get the point of stories like this. I mean, they’re barely even stories. More like sterilized diary entries, related for the sole purpose of letting BTB man-babies know that someone out there is thinking of them.

Yes. You really are a sucker. Paying for sex is still understandable, but paying for celibacy, which does not concern you in any way, is an idiotic whim of a spoiled squishy.

An “all women are sluts” rant filled with every dumb cliché in the book.

Noone is dumb enough to give up a quarter of their wealth in this situation.

Meh, too dry.

Entertaining but it feels unfinished. With his family background, I would think an heir would be a must and you mentioned early he wanted kids. 4*

Overall the story wasn't bad, but the ending felt rushed and incomplete.

I'm enjoying your stories. You have a good flowing writing style. Please keep coming up with more stories

Sad story. He never got a real marriage nor children.

LOL! Out here in the west I do a lot of business with Dolan's lumber. Pretty good story except I don't think he got mad enough at the two women and you could definetely use a proof reader or editor.

5 stars.

Interesting. Being rich does give one lots of options not available to most men.

Seems to me Mr. Dolan should have suffered a bit more for his double dip into the MC's marriages. Maybe the MC is a poor judge of character or has some glaring personality fault, but what are the odds of picking two consecutive cheaters?

I thought this was pretty well written and an improvement over some of your other submissions.

3 stars

Not a terrible story but not a lot of emotion felt here. The characters are all very one-dimensional and the MC didn't really come across as having much of a personality. A little more dialog might have made them more rounded out. Thanks for sharing.

But George's nuts still sit in his bowl, uncracked. That is the only way to stop a predatory lothario like George. In war it isn't always necessary to eliminate an opponent. Merely rendering them impotent can take them out of the fight.

3 stars on a good day

Not bad, but I agree that George should have felt a little physical damage at least.

Nice guy,picked the wrong women.

Funny twist to same guy . An older friend out at a bar bumped into a guys wife that was always an asshole to him over the years. She was very attractive and about twelve years younger than them . She was a bit tipsy and he bought her a few more drinks listening to her complain about a few big marital issues they were having. Well he very smoothly talked her into joining him in a little revenge for her on her hubby but she didn’t know or realize because of drinks that he was the one really getting revenge. He popped a viagra earlier in hopes of getting lucky than another as the left for his apt. Well as he stated he basically took out all his anger towards her hubby and hate fucked her all night and next morning before dropping her off at her home with hubby coming out yelling at her and him just waving and smiling as he drove off. He taped most of the night as he pounded her in different positions, doing her ass , violently face fucking her and at one point legs over arms of a chair while she sexily sucked his cock and balls he guided her head lower having her in her drunken state as he said looking in the camera for her to make out with his asshole. Between her legs , all over her ass and tits wet love bites . His video ends with him stratiling her face cumming on it with her saying you have the biggest cock I ever had snd fuck so much better than my asshole husband. She was fed those words . He showed everyone they knew saying it was s as last laugh for him over the asshole. They did divorces and he did continue to fuck her but they never dated just hooked up often . Apparently she also just once fucked a college kid out at a casino bar . What a bad ending to a marriage can do to a woman scorned and her looking for cock for revenge

Just cruel. No character shown, and no wonder the wives cheated.

I like the breezy writing style. 4 stars.

@anon How is that a funny twist? You basically just told us that your older friend raped another man's wife, illegally taped it, and illegally displayed it. What your friend did was heinous, he should be in prison, and frankly, you should be examining your own self.