by ArseGratiaArtis
5 stars, as your stories always are! I have heard that men do get raped now and then, especially in jail. I'm sure that is no one's fantasy! I have been approached now and then by men wanting me to be their "Mistress". So I do think maybe that fantasy is more common than we might think. I like your "first person" style of writing! It makes your stories feel more personal. I hope you will keep up the great work!
Great story, I was not really into the 'fantasy' rape scene, but you handled it quite delicately. (BTW, call the cops everytime, they might have left a clue or be trackable on CCTV)
I know about stories, or the characters, deciding to take the narrative off in a direction you never expected and my favourite 'real' author Terry Pratchett RIP said the same.
Sequel? Unless you think the characters are the right vehicle for more exploration of other themes (and as I type I think they might well be) then don't push one. I am currently doing 1x: Stand alone stories, but include a summary of what happened after to give closure. 5 stars.
Some interesting word play, and great twist at the end. Very well crafted, if not exactly to my taste. Still, five stars.