All Comments on 'Turnabout Pt. 05'

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PrettyInPanties69PrettyInPanties69over 2 years ago

Great follow up chapter. Drinking her hot piss and thus sealing his fate was a great shift in the dynamic of their relationship. I can’t wait for the next part as she takes him further down the rabbit hole.

OOAAOOAAover 2 years ago

SUPER HOT and KINKY!!!!!!! Really exciting!!!! EVERYTHING!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very wild! Not everyone’s cup of tea (or piss) but certainly hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Spiralling into the gutter, yuk.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I find the pee part nasty, way not my thing. But I also see it as a continuation of the submission and degradation of the soon to be fully feminized husband.

Not my favorite chapter to be sure, but thanks for sharing, Jackie.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very erotic progression- well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

After the pee, I am not sure I want to continue this series.

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